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» Tenshi Sneaking out to see Sumaru
Finvarre Yuki EmptySat Mar 29, 2014 5:21 pm by Dann432432

» Indigo vs Sento vsTenzo
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» I Declare (after 4 weeks so why not now)
Finvarre Yuki EmptySat Jan 25, 2014 4:51 am by Corren

» Where to nest? (Poll)
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» Early declaration.
Finvarre Yuki EmptyFri Jan 17, 2014 6:18 am by Aegis

» Tenzo's Declaration :3
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» Hokage Election (Story Line)
Finvarre Yuki EmptyWed Jan 15, 2014 4:00 pm by Dann432432

» Double-Edged Sword (Locked)
Finvarre Yuki EmptyWed Jan 15, 2014 3:48 am by Tenzo Uzumaki

» Meet The Father
Finvarre Yuki EmptyTue Jan 14, 2014 10:44 pm by Dann432432

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Join date : 2013-11-20
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PostSubject: Re: Finvarre Yuki   Finvarre Yuki EmptyFri Nov 22, 2013 6:30 am

Finvarre-Chan! As always, your writing skills are far better than mine can ever compare to. (Let's not even get into drawing capabilities...) I'm quite interested to see a character use Ice Release, that isn't my character! (I think one other person might, but I'm not entirely sure!) Anywho, your details aren't too long, but they aren't too short either. Quality is definitely visible in your writing, and I have no qualms with ranking you as Jounin!... Except one. You kept Major as "Majour". HOW CAN YOU LET SIX WIN!? This is 'Murica, woman! We don't use them fancy "U's"! >:U

lol. At any rate, very nice character! You can declare next week, to be tested for ANBU ranking. To anyone reading this... This is a great example of what a character SHOULD be like! (Gods, I sound like a teacher...)
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